Des TS #5

Des TS #5


Date: May 14th (Wednesday).

Location: Outside Calvin's Coffee Shop.

Topic/Skill: Writing/ Structuring essays and coming up with supporting details.

Feedback provided to the tutee: We focused on writing essays. My tutee discussed troubles with applying his limited vocabulary in explanatory essays and running out of synonyms by the time he is writing his supporting details. We worked on using graphic organizers to help plan his writing. We went over some editing and revising tips. One thing we particularly focused on was coming up with ideas for supporting details via asking ourselves questions such as:


Who are the people involved in the context or problem related to the topic sentence? 

Why might some people disagree with my topic sentence and why is my stance better?

What are the continuity and changes related to my topic sentence?


Our next session will focus on the feedback from his most recent writing samples.

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